You have a great breadth so far Billy! I think you should take out the two pink pears and keep the third pear drawing. Your architecture drawings are amazing and I love how you put together the three drawings. You should put a painting in your breadth since you don't have any yet.
Billy! I really agree with what Mr. Hevel said about your portrait and your architecture triptych. They definitely bring the number of your scoring up (not that the rest are bad, just not as outstanding :) ) Ellipses need work; maybe add value to a lot of the other pieces. overall, pretty good! I would give you a high 5 (as in rating)
I love that all of your pieces are very precise and clean. You definitely have your own clear style.I agree that your triptych and your portrait pieces are really stunning! I would take out one of the pears, but do something else with a lot of bright color.
Maisie: Where is Unicorn Vomit? I think you should definitely put that piece in your portfolio. It's very colorful and it would add a nice touch to your portfolio. I can see that you know how to use charcoal and pencil very well and you use other media as well. I would say a 5. I think your paintings of architecture are dragging you down.
Billy! I really like your breadth, i love the triptych & the self portrait that you made, as Seth said, "It's looking into my soul!". Haha but seriously, I really like the pears too, but you probably want to take out one with the pink background. & I agree with what Mr.Hevel said, you should probably do another piece with pink in it! 5!
You have a great breadth so far Billy! I think you should take out the two pink pears and keep the third pear drawing. Your architecture drawings are amazing and I love how you put together the three drawings. You should put a painting in your breadth since you don't have any yet.
ReplyDeleteBilly! I really agree with what Mr. Hevel said about your portrait and your architecture triptych. They definitely bring the number of your scoring up (not that the rest are bad, just not as outstanding :) )
ReplyDeleteEllipses need work; maybe add value to a lot of the other pieces.
overall, pretty good! I would give you a high 5 (as in rating)
I love that all of your pieces are very precise and clean. You definitely have your own clear style.I agree that your triptych and your portrait pieces are really stunning! I would take out one of the pears, but do something else with a lot of bright color.
ReplyDeleteMaisie: Where is Unicorn Vomit? I think you should definitely put that piece in your portfolio. It's very colorful and it would add a nice touch to your portfolio. I can see that you know how to use charcoal and pencil very well and you use other media as well. I would say a 5. I think your paintings of architecture are dragging you down.
ReplyDeleteBilly! I really like your breadth, i love the triptych & the self portrait that you made, as Seth said, "It's looking into my soul!". Haha but seriously, I really like the pears too, but you probably want to take out one with the pink background. & I agree with what Mr.Hevel said, you should probably do another piece with pink in it! 5!
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