Alright, so I think the most successful are alineisjustaline and your comic. I still think your comic is really cool, but it makes my eyes hurt...but not in a bad way. I think with the one at the bottom, with the portrait of you needs to be connected to the background. Maybe make the background more complicated, like the shadows in the figure, or bring color into the figure (blue and or orange?) or bring greyscale into the background. What else...the pollution needs more, what if you made three other complimentary pieces (with different color schemes) but like they're all different things to do with pollution and in that really simplistic style, and then have it be like the Marilyn Monroe thing, but not?...also if you end up needing more pieces just stick in some of your tatoo-looking ink drawings, they would fit well, or is that what you are doing for your concentration?
I really enjoy looking at your pieces, you have done a really good job on your breath pieces. I think the strongest one are your comic, "A line is just a line" piece, and "Never stop walking". I think you should try to add something else in your last piece, but also try to make some other pieces with photos too.
Your comic really shines out of all of your pieces. I think it's because it really demonstrates you style the most! The retro-esque colors are livened up with your illustrations.
I also like the collage of text over imagery. It looks like you took scissors and glue to a newspaper. Maybe you could try messing with that overlay with colors and other media to create more depth in other pieces. Just an option though, its very graphic the way it is.
Alright, so I think the most successful are alineisjustaline and your comic. I still think your comic is really cool, but it makes my eyes hurt...but not in a bad way. I think with the one at the bottom, with the portrait of you needs to be connected to the background. Maybe make the background more complicated, like the shadows in the figure, or bring color into the figure (blue and or orange?) or bring greyscale into the background. What else...the pollution needs more, what if you made three other complimentary pieces (with different color schemes) but like they're all different things to do with pollution and in that really simplistic style, and then have it be like the Marilyn Monroe thing, but not?...also if you end up needing more pieces just stick in some of your tatoo-looking ink drawings, they would fit well, or is that what you are doing for your concentration?
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy looking at your pieces, you have done a really good job on your breath pieces. I think the strongest one are your comic, "A line is just a line" piece, and "Never stop walking". I think you should try to add something else in your last piece, but also try to make some other pieces with photos too.
ReplyDeleteYour comic really shines out of all of your pieces. I think it's because it really demonstrates you style the most! The retro-esque colors are livened up with your illustrations.
ReplyDeleteI also like the collage of text over imagery. It looks like you took scissors and glue to a newspaper. Maybe you could try messing with that overlay with colors and other media to create more depth in other pieces. Just an option though, its very graphic the way it is.